literature

Noticing

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I notice you.
I see the basics,
Hair color and height,
What you look like to an outsider,
But I also notice details that maybe only I see.
Things like the way your hair is always done,
And the gentle way your arms swing when you walk.
I notice the subtilties of your figure,
Your beautiful and enviable arms and legs,
And your slim, graceful fingers.
I watch as the wind blows your hair,
Making you look even better,
And I've learned your taste in clothes
As well as your best colors.
I notice when your nose wrinkles
And how, on you, it still looks good.
But above all these things,
I've noticed you're too good for me.
I'm not a stalker or anything, but this person is my friend, so I spend enough time aroud them to see things like these. This sounded so much better in my head. This kind of goes with "Questions". I'm sad to say I really do know this person is too good for me and will never see me the way I see them. As always, comments are appreciated.
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darkelvenfaerie's avatar
You see more than others see.
Which can be good in a sense.
Even if you two are not together, seeing all of this proves you are a great friend.
Do not worry you do not sound like a stalker.

Blessed Be,
Midnight Writer Shadow

Founder of Candlelight Writers